Thursday, September 17, 2009

Good exercise for my writing class: Find the errors....

Attn Sir,
As a matter of urgency my Patient a widow an American born Honkong citizen {Mrs Carrie Lam} is at the point of death here in Dubai Hospital. She made an oral will earlier this morning for her bond investment of £6.878.678 with one of the bank here in Dubai . She mandated me as her Doctor to find a good /American/ Hongkong citizen man or woman whom will make use of this fund as humanitarian assistance and whom will use it to help the less previlledged in Hongkong/America . If you receive this letter with interest respond and i will explain more to you on the next step to take.
Dr. Amro Al-Astal

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