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Since I was a young girl, I have always been interested in outer space. One of my favourite activities is to go to the planetarium. I have been to a number of planetaria in Canada and in the United States. Recently, I visited New York City, and I went to the Rose Planetarium at the Museum of Natural History. While visiting this museum, I got to explore the wonders of the universe. I saw a rock which came from the moon, I got to measure my weight on other planets, and I saw the space show in the domed theatre. My only disappointment was that I did not see my favourite astrophysicist, Neil DeGrasse Tyson.